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Monday, November 22, 2010

Out Line Research Paper #2

Thesis: Men should not be fearful of one's opinion targeting their furture in the health profession.

Point#1
Everyone has the freedom of choice towards chossing thier career.

Point#2
IF men chose to live their life based on what the media,and,or society projects, how could males be consider a man if our judgementis determined on what others think?

Point#3
In the medical feild there are many branches in which the male and female are positioned. In result to this line of work the outcome is balanced.

1 comment:

  1. This is a nice start to an outline. In your thesis, who are you referring to when you say "one's"? Do you mean men should not be discouraged from pursuing careers in health care -here you mean nursing, right?- because society views this as a feminine profession?
    Your first point is quite broad. Maybe you should think about why men are needed in the nursing profession? The second point is interesting. As for the third point, I'm not quite sure what you mean? Are you saying that there is plenty of positions for men and women in the health professions? How does this support your thesis?
    But remember that you still have not complete part 1-proposal which was due Nov. 12- and part 2-annotated bibliography, which was due Nov. 22. Please do so ASAP!

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